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Smoking Out Another Story - Found Poetry by Flutingspirit Smoking Out Another Story - Found Poetry by Flutingspirit
Found poetry/collage using black masking tape, scotch tape, sandpaper, glue and pages from the Jehovah's Witnesses publication 'Watchtower'.

SMOKING OUT ANOTHER STORY

I drank it all in.
A hopeless world
Of false documents,
A parched desert
Crushed in my heart
With
Some of my vices.

Baptized
Without guilt
Without prejudice.
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anila73 Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely love!
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:iconexistencewesummonyou:
Very interesting piece... glad to have drunk it all in. I particularly like how the lines "with/ some of my vices" complicate the narrator's perspective.
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:iconflutingspirit:
Thanks for the feedback :)
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Sammur-amat Dec 15, 2012   General Artist
Congratulations on the well-deserved DLD, dearie! :hug:
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:iconflutingspirit:
Thanks :) And a merry Christmas !
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Sammur-amat Dec 15, 2012   General Artist
My pleasure! :la:
A merry Christmas and happy holidays to you and all your loved ones, darling! :huggle:
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:icondailylitdeviations:
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconflutingspirit:
Many thanks for featuring my poem :) Much appreciated.
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roundtower Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº 4 o Destacados nº 4" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo).


* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 4. (Best works of the group).


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